Tuesday, October 12, 2010

The Remnant

Well I guess today's a creative day for me...another poem entitled The Remnant.  Remember...feedback is welcome!


The Remnant 
by Nathan Taylor

I watch her
But I don't watch from a distance
Looking directly into her eyes
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
From the end of her bed
Changing in front of the mirror
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
Slowly removing her clothes
Dropping them on the floor
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
Getting into bed
Gently falling asleep
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
Wrestling with her dreams
Tossing and turning
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
Sitting upright
Opening her eyes
Calling my name
But she doesn't see me
I watch her
Realising I am gone
Crying herself back to sleep
But she doesn't see me

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